To celebrate our first day of snow here in Minnesota, we are themeing our entire day around SNOW!
In writing class we read the The Snowflake, A Water Cycle Story. Then we wrote our own story in first-person about a snowflake's journey.
What part of your story, or a classmate's story, stuck out to you?
something that stuck out to me was that frankie kept us with anomatopoeia's to keep it interesting and rich with details
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ReplyDeleteI thought that Cameron had descriptive but also creative details in his story!!
15 Something that stuck out was when Alexa described people making the snowball and how the flakes were squished together.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that stuck out to me was in Alexa's story im pretty sure she said gliding down with the wind in her face.
ReplyDelete#3 a thing that stuck out to me in my story was when me (the snowflake) was tossed around and stomped on and skied on
ReplyDeleteone thing that stuck out to me was max`s story is when he is a snow flake stuck in to a snowball fight #25
ReplyDeleteone of the part that stuck out on me was Camron's detail's in his story
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ReplyDeleteMax's was awesome because he used very good detial on the snow ball fight
Frankie's story was very good because it had an action packed story
ReplyDeleteCameron had tons of good details in his story
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