Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Lit. 1

As you see everyone is very focused
The class today is learning about comments in literacy 1 at 10 o' clock in the morning. The kids are learning to do polite comments from a spelling story. Eli says we should try really focusing on the comments not just writing the story was "Good."

How do  you think you can improve your comments you give?
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  1. AnonymousOctober 14, 2014 at 6:43 PM

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    I think I can improve my comments by using a more descriptive vocabulary.

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    1. UnknownOctober 20, 2014 at 7:12 AM

      Great idea! The more specific you an be through the use of your vocabulary the better.

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  2. AnonymousOctober 19, 2014 at 11:22 AM

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    You can say, " I think the story is good because _________." and then tell them exactly what was good about it.

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    1. UnknownOctober 20, 2014 at 7:13 AM

      I like how you are looking for positive things to say about their work. Don't forget to pick positive things that they can use again in another story. Your goal is to make them a better writer!

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    2. LindenNovember 3, 2014 at 7:21 PM

      oh.

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  3. LindenNovember 3, 2014 at 7:21 PM

    i like how bob loves cheeseburgers. instead, it was funny how you put 2 rows of O's to show how much bob likes cheeeeese burgers!

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